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Another restless night,
Trying to figure out how I feel about you...
Another restless night,
Can't stop asking myself "Does she feel's the same?"
Every night before I fall asleep,
You sneak into my thoughts...
When I remember your sweet, sweet face,
My start pounding in my chest
Cause when I'm think of you,
My mind is at better place...
Every time that I'm with you,
it feels so right, it feels so true...
It feels like everything is where it belongs!
Cause when I'm with you...
Cause when I'm with you,
The whole world seems like he got an Adrenalin shot
Cause when I'm with you,
Every little thing makes me laugh.
Another restless night,
Trying to figure out how I feel about you...
Another restless night,
And I haven't got a clue...
Trying to figure out how I feel about you...
Another restless night,
Can't stop asking myself "Does she feel's the same?"
Every night before I fall asleep,
You sneak into my thoughts...
When I remember your sweet, sweet face,
My start pounding in my chest
Cause when I'm think of you,
My mind is at better place...
Every time that I'm with you,
it feels so right, it feels so true...
It feels like everything is where it belongs!
Cause when I'm with you...
Cause when I'm with you,
The whole world seems like he got an Adrenalin shot
Cause when I'm with you,
Every little thing makes me laugh.
Another restless night,
Trying to figure out how I feel about you...
Another restless night,
And I haven't got a clue...
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A few days ago I was trying to go to sleep and this song just came to my head suddenly and the next morning I started adding music and a few more lines and here it is!
Hope you guys like it!
Peace out!
A few days ago I was trying to go to sleep and this song just came to my head suddenly and the next morning I started adding music and a few more lines and here it is!
Hope you guys like it!
Peace out!
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Well, it's nice. personaly I prefer a Classic Poems, but Modern are also quite good. (and if we don't learn about them in school they're even better X[D)
But I do have a few notes.
First - it's not wise to use... how should I call it... a shortening words, such as "'Cuz"; not because it's forbidden or somthing, but it's just doesn't look good. like when you read a stroy, it will look funny if you somthing like "I took the book and gave it to U" Like... is it so hard to write "You"
or "Cause"?
Plus, I dunno if you tried it to rhyme, like in "Every time that I'm with you, it feels so right, it feels so true", or if you didn't, like in "Another restless night, Trying to figure out how I feel about you"... So both ways are great, but together it's sound strange...
Basicly it's good, but you could sharpen it a little bit more
But I do have a few notes.
First - it's not wise to use... how should I call it... a shortening words, such as "'Cuz"; not because it's forbidden or somthing, but it's just doesn't look good. like when you read a stroy, it will look funny if you somthing like "I took the book and gave it to U" Like... is it so hard to write "You"
or "Cause"?
Plus, I dunno if you tried it to rhyme, like in "Every time that I'm with you, it feels so right, it feels so true", or if you didn't, like in "Another restless night, Trying to figure out how I feel about you"... So both ways are great, but together it's sound strange...
Basicly it's good, but you could sharpen it a little bit more